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without a care,
without a reason,
they drop the bombs,
they drop the death,
as the world caves,
his only thought is her,
and his heart fills with joy,
as his mind fills with her image,
the ground around him burns,
as his heart explodes,
so does his machine of war,
and he's sane again,
he's sane again...
without a reason,
they drop the bombs,
they drop the death,
as the world caves,
his only thought is her,
and his heart fills with joy,
as his mind fills with her image,
the ground around him burns,
as his heart explodes,
so does his machine of war,
and he's sane again,
he's sane again...
third poem
critique wanted
critique wanted
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Awesome. But you want my honest critique or whatev? Here it is: you should make it into a song. Dude, that's a perfect chorus, you have NO idea. You just need to write the music and stuffs. ^^ I love it.